How a friend could be better?

A friend could be better if they can share the trampoline by letting my friend go first. 

I like a friend who is honest to other people.
I like a friend who is kind to others by asking them if they want to play.

I like a friend who is happy and playful with others.
I like a friend who is loving and not calling me names.
I like a friend who cares for other people.

Most important thing friends could be better, if they can help me clean up out side.

L.I I am learning  to write a persuasive writing.